NeverMore (pt.9)

July 17th, 2014, 10:08 am

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Royle McCulloch, July 17th, 2014, 10:08 am     Reply

Please comment to tell me what you think.

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Advertisement, July 17th, 2014, 11:59 am     Reply

Well, every single comic is massive in width, this site layout is an unappealing mess (seriously why is everything transparent and why are the colors so ugly), your speech bubbles contrast dark colors with dark colors (which is a bad thing), you feel the need to use some inane effect in nearly every single panel (and the effects just make the comic less appealing to look at), this comic is so edgy its giving me splinters, some effects look sprited and pixely and as a result they do look good when mixed with the more organic looking effects, this comic focuses on like 5000 characters and I have no idea whats going on in the plot or half of the panels presented.

Thats what I think.

Royle McCulloch, July 17th, 2014, 12:09 pm     Reply

@Advertisement: Alright thanks.
Seriously, first comment I have had in a while that gives me information to improve on.
I'm not saying I'll attack all of those issues because there are still things I like to do as my comic style. But others I see your point.

Advertisement, July 17th, 2014, 12:34 pm     Reply

You're welcome I guess.

Hyper Shadow, July 17th, 2014, 3:01 pm     Reply

Wait...didn't his dad die in AvHr?

Ultimate the Hedgehog, July 17th, 2014, 5:12 pm     Reply

So awesome but... scar... on the wrong side.... still awesome.

Ultimate the Hedgehog, July 17th, 2014, 5:13 pm     Reply


godmoderncommander, July 17th, 2014, 5:29 pm     Reply

...What is up with villains always landing on top of towers with little room on them every time there is a fight going on? One of these days, she's going trip and break her neck.

Royle McCulloch, July 17th, 2014, 8:01 pm     Reply

@godmoderncommander: Makes them feel ontop. Plus they look more skilled if they can easily balance on such small spaces.

For this case it was to get on the same level as kay and ult.

Hyper Shadow, July 18th, 2014, 2:59 pm     Reply

@Ultimate the Hedgehog: Different Universe? What are you talking about? You said this was a sequel to AvHr and he died in there didn't he?

Royle McCulloch, July 19th, 2014, 4:28 pm     Reply

@Hyper Shadow: Let me explain. Animals Vs Humans takes place before hope fear and revenge. In a different universe. What connects the stories is that same Royle, Shard, and Thraxix are in both. So avh and hfr take place on different mobius's.

Hyper Shadow, July 19th, 2014, 6:43 pm     Reply

Then why did you tell me this was a direct sequel to it? Not a parallel Universe?

Ultimate the Hedgehog, July 23rd, 2014, 11:54 am     Reply

@Hyper Shadow: I have actually told you guys over and over that it is NOT a direct sequel. If anything, it's more connected to my other comic (Trinity) because that takes place in the same universe.